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As I was not very familiar with this topic, I had to study this topic in order to review this paper sincerly. As a result, there exists so many successful report concerning "agent-based modeling/simulation." IMHO, this paper failed to summarize these recent result and furthermore how the proposal is unique and good. 

with keywords like
quality assurance process
safety occurrence reporting system
agent-based organizational model

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However, the
links of safety culture with organizational structures
and processes are yet not well understood and this
affects the determination of ways to improve safety
culture.