investigate a model -> proposed by others solve the model? spatial variable x means 1D "f represents the density of the ECM" is not clear. what, on earth, is density of a matrix? d_{i,j} in the equation next to (3.1) was not defined anywhere. but just mentioned "See [6} assuming di,j is distanse between xi and xj instead See [6] caption of Fig. 1 needs more explanation not only in text Fig.1I, [7] __________________________________________________________________________________________________ "solve the model" is not a good expression. (1) "f represents the density of the ECM" is not clear. what is density of a matrix? (2) d_{i,j} in the equation next to (3.1) was not defined anywhere. but just mentioned "See [6} (3) just suggesting like "Fig.1I, [7]" is not good. (4) caption of Fig. 1 needs more explanation not only in text (5) author wrote "proposal in [9] + authors proposal (2.6) and (2.7) but [9] does not include those two conditions in it? (6) more explanation would be necessary for the reason what 1D is sufficient as the spatial variable x. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the organizer reference delete footnote if ...